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My Girl
Sat Aug 04, 2012 11:47 am
It's all about a girl I've met from future ..
Shall we start?
ok..
It's a night and rainy day ..
Location : School
Me : Gosh.. I forgot my umbrella .... damn rain.. >.< i wish someone lend me an umbrella
jess : Hey zup... * hug... it's too cold... please hug me.. please.. XD
Me : keep away from me.. they see us...
Jess : I don't care... Just give me 5 minutes ok..
Me : Aw .. tsk.. you always like that.. since yesterday.. what happen to you.. ? are you sick or what?
Jess : No i'm not.. I'm just wanna Hug you.. in a rainy day.. :3
Me : Whatever.. Do you have umbrella? i forgot mine...
Jess : Aw me too i don't have either ..
Me : waaa Is this the end for me.. ? i'm stuck with this girl.. waa
Suddenly Jess took my bag and jump into the rain..
Me :what the.. hey Come Back! Give back my bag.. or else...
Jess: or else what ? go to my mom and tell that you sleep again in the class..?
Me: Please.. just give it back..
Jass : Catch me hehe
Me: Hey Come Back!
("FlashBack")
Narrator
Jass is a friend of mine.. we are childhood friends.. same age .. she's cute. kind.. average girl ....
i know all about her secrets .. likes.. all about her ... and she knows all about me as well.. Our Parents said that we must get married once we graduated Study..
She gives me headache everyday .. doing some stuff.. Knocking down big boys ... She's good in Dota.. and other boys thing.. I don't know why shes always clinging at me.. hugging me .. ordering me around.. Laughing at my grades.. and Punch my face.. when i'm crying.. She's always with me..
Until that day...
Jess : Josh! my dear Josh! Hows your day? did you pee in you bed again this morning ? huh ?
Me : Jess Come on.. i'm already 15 .. that's totally gross.. i'm not like that.. peeing my bed? eew.. Maybe You?
Jess : You wish.. ahahha .. Anyway.. are you going tonight prom ?
Me : hmm ..I'm not sure, First i have no partner.. and i have no chance to dance with Marz ..
Jess : What you mean Leonimarz Ortis of 3rd year section 2? she's not even beautiful for me.. she's like a Snowman.. in dress.. ahaha.. She's not you type ok? so just give up.. there are many girls around you.. just keep looking..
Me : I hope so.. *sigh..
Jess : Come on.. Cheer up.. you want some Fishball? i'm gonna treat you one..
Me : ok..
Location : After School . Fish ball stand
Jess : Nice Fishball are soo delicious ! ahaha
Me : yeah your right..
Manong : Ok.. My fishball is totally delicious .. you two already eaten all of my fishballs.. hmm.. *Counting ..... 290 pesos.. all of it..
Jess : ok.. just a minute sir.. * looking at her wallet... , Aw .. I forgot my wallet!
Me : what? Shit.. !
Manong : Don't tell me.. You gonna Eat and Run? *Looks
Me : hey where is Jess... ? T_T i'm the one left again.. she did it again.. saying she treat me some food.. but in the end.. i'm the one .. pay all of it.. *sigh .. ok ok..
I'm going to pay..
Location : My Home at Makati
On Phone
Me: Hello? Jess?
Jess:ow hello Josh.. Thanks for the food... i really appreciate it :3 you come tonight?
Me : *Sigh at Prom? I've told you already.. i have no reason to go there..
Jess : you are numb.. >.<
Me :why ?
Jess : i'm going to wait for you.. so just go ok ? i'm going to punch you and beat you till you drop if you don't go .. ok bye.... *Phone hanged.
Me : Hello ? Jess... *toooottt ,, Aw... damn..
Knocks on the door.. Josh are you there?
Me : Why Mom.. I'm Busy here..
My Mom : Busy? in watching Porn? Just Open this door and talk to me.. i have something for you..
Me : *open what's that mom.. ? aw...
Mom : you must go in your Prom.. with this suit.. ok ? *Smiles
Me : Damn Jess.. she told it to my mom.. >.< , i don't want to go... !!
Mom : ayt,,! Don't be shy..
Me : I'm not shy... I dont want to go.. even you force me.. over my dead body! NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!
Narrator : Meanwhile outside the School
Me :i'm Doomed.. <-- waaaaa they force me to go in here.. >.<
Sir Delarosa : Ohh you here.. let's go in.. hey you others come on.. the prom is just begun..
Location Inside Gym
Me : Damn Jess.. you are dead..
Jeff "Classmate" : Hey dude.. you see Marz already? she's Incredible Beautiful... I bet she's going to be Miss Prom..
Me : Really?
Jeff : actually shes with Mr. Delarosa.. Go check it out ..
Me : ah ok..
In Mr. Delarosa Location..
with Marz in elegant beautiful dress
Me: Hello Marz ? Nice Dress
Marz : ow Josh.. Thanks.. But i'm Busy now.. maybe later ok ??
Me : of course take your time.. i'm going to take some food..
Marz : ok bye..
Me : I mean it.. Maybe this is the not for me.. >.< this is it.. i'm going home.
anonymous Girl : Hey Where are you going?
Me: I'm going to go home.. this is not for me..
anonymous Girl : Don't you want to Dance with me ?
Me : Huh ? *looks at the girl
anonymous Gilr : Dance with me or Get punch in the Face?
Me : Jess? Is that you? I mean.. wow.. you are soo beautiful
Jess : Yes it's me.. i'm going to slap you for not noticing me.. Btw.. you really think i'm Beautiful in this dress ? *Blush
Me : ahm.. Yes.. "How come.. a girl always play dota and acts like a boy.. dress like a boy.. would be like this.. "
Jess : hey don't stare at me.. i feel ashamed >.<
Me : You look great
Jess : ok let's go inside and have an entrance
Inside Gym..
Me : Wanna Dance With me?
Jess : ahmm.. Yes .. i want too..
Me : I'm sorry i'm not a good Dancer..
Jess : Me either..
*
The two of us dance like nobody is around... Time Stop on us.. Like we don't care what will happen tomorrow .. all i can say is.. she became more beautiful in her dress.. I also seen her face closely.. no make up but.. i can't tell... for me.. she's beautiful tonight.. Different from.. Jess i know .... she dance graceful and acts like a girl.."
Suddenly the Music Stop..
Jess:Hey Josh.. the Music Stop..
Me: ow.. it's too fast...
Jess : Wanna go outside and get some fresh air?
Me: ahmm ok.. there are too many people here.. so going outside is ok..
Outside the Gym..
Jess: ahmm Do you think i'm ok today?
Me: of course you look great... y..yo..you are beautiful ...
Jess: that's it?
Me: what that's it?
Jess: you are totally numb,,, I mean am i ok ?
Me : yeah your ok..
Jess : i mean.. am i ok to be your partner..?
Me : Partner?
Jess: yup Partner .. i mean. Your Girl.. I want to be your girl.. .. you are always telling me that i'm a boy.. so i'm dressed like this to prove to you that.. i can be more beautiful than Marz..
Me: *Shocks
Jezz: I'm willing to change myself.. i can do what ever it is.. i can be your best girl ever.. i will not punch you ,i will not tease you anymore.. so please..
Me:Jess ... this is unexpected .. i can't answer right now..
Jezz : Is it Marz?
Me: No.. not her.. it because maybe let's think about it ok? were friends right?
Jezz : Stupid... you are stupid! * Runaway Crying
Me : Jess wait.. Don't be like that.. hey come back..
To be Continue...
Shall we start?
ok..
It's a night and rainy day ..
Location : School
Me : Gosh.. I forgot my umbrella .... damn rain.. >.< i wish someone lend me an umbrella
jess : Hey zup... * hug... it's too cold... please hug me.. please.. XD
Me : keep away from me.. they see us...
Jess : I don't care... Just give me 5 minutes ok..
Me : Aw .. tsk.. you always like that.. since yesterday.. what happen to you.. ? are you sick or what?
Jess : No i'm not.. I'm just wanna Hug you.. in a rainy day.. :3
Me : Whatever.. Do you have umbrella? i forgot mine...
Jess : Aw me too i don't have either ..
Me : waaa Is this the end for me.. ? i'm stuck with this girl.. waa
Suddenly Jess took my bag and jump into the rain..
Me :what the.. hey Come Back! Give back my bag.. or else...
Jess: or else what ? go to my mom and tell that you sleep again in the class..?
Me: Please.. just give it back..
Jass : Catch me hehe
Me: Hey Come Back!
("FlashBack")
Narrator
Jass is a friend of mine.. we are childhood friends.. same age .. she's cute. kind.. average girl ....
i know all about her secrets .. likes.. all about her ... and she knows all about me as well.. Our Parents said that we must get married once we graduated Study..
She gives me headache everyday .. doing some stuff.. Knocking down big boys ... She's good in Dota.. and other boys thing.. I don't know why shes always clinging at me.. hugging me .. ordering me around.. Laughing at my grades.. and Punch my face.. when i'm crying.. She's always with me..
Until that day...
Jess : Josh! my dear Josh! Hows your day? did you pee in you bed again this morning ? huh ?
Me : Jess Come on.. i'm already 15 .. that's totally gross.. i'm not like that.. peeing my bed? eew.. Maybe You?
Jess : You wish.. ahahha .. Anyway.. are you going tonight prom ?
Me : hmm ..I'm not sure, First i have no partner.. and i have no chance to dance with Marz ..
Jess : What you mean Leonimarz Ortis of 3rd year section 2? she's not even beautiful for me.. she's like a Snowman.. in dress.. ahaha.. She's not you type ok? so just give up.. there are many girls around you.. just keep looking..
Me : I hope so.. *sigh..
Jess : Come on.. Cheer up.. you want some Fishball? i'm gonna treat you one..
Me : ok..
Location : After School . Fish ball stand
Jess : Nice Fishball are soo delicious ! ahaha
Me : yeah your right..
Manong : Ok.. My fishball is totally delicious .. you two already eaten all of my fishballs.. hmm.. *Counting ..... 290 pesos.. all of it..
Jess : ok.. just a minute sir.. * looking at her wallet... , Aw .. I forgot my wallet!
Me : what? Shit.. !
Manong : Don't tell me.. You gonna Eat and Run? *Looks
Me : hey where is Jess... ? T_T i'm the one left again.. she did it again.. saying she treat me some food.. but in the end.. i'm the one .. pay all of it.. *sigh .. ok ok..
I'm going to pay..
Location : My Home at Makati
On Phone
Me: Hello? Jess?
Jess:ow hello Josh.. Thanks for the food... i really appreciate it :3 you come tonight?
Me : *Sigh at Prom? I've told you already.. i have no reason to go there..
Jess : you are numb.. >.<
Me :why ?
Jess : i'm going to wait for you.. so just go ok ? i'm going to punch you and beat you till you drop if you don't go .. ok bye.... *Phone hanged.
Me : Hello ? Jess... *toooottt ,, Aw... damn..
Knocks on the door.. Josh are you there?
Me : Why Mom.. I'm Busy here..
My Mom : Busy? in watching Porn? Just Open this door and talk to me.. i have something for you..
Me : *open what's that mom.. ? aw...
Mom : you must go in your Prom.. with this suit.. ok ? *Smiles
Me : Damn Jess.. she told it to my mom.. >.< , i don't want to go... !!
Mom : ayt,,! Don't be shy..
Me : I'm not shy... I dont want to go.. even you force me.. over my dead body! NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!
Narrator : Meanwhile outside the School
Me :i'm Doomed.. <-- waaaaa they force me to go in here.. >.<
Sir Delarosa : Ohh you here.. let's go in.. hey you others come on.. the prom is just begun..
Location Inside Gym
Me : Damn Jess.. you are dead..
Jeff "Classmate" : Hey dude.. you see Marz already? she's Incredible Beautiful... I bet she's going to be Miss Prom..
Me : Really?
Jeff : actually shes with Mr. Delarosa.. Go check it out ..
Me : ah ok..
In Mr. Delarosa Location..
with Marz in elegant beautiful dress
Me: Hello Marz ? Nice Dress
Marz : ow Josh.. Thanks.. But i'm Busy now.. maybe later ok ??
Me : of course take your time.. i'm going to take some food..
Marz : ok bye..
Me : I mean it.. Maybe this is the not for me.. >.< this is it.. i'm going home.
anonymous Girl : Hey Where are you going?
Me: I'm going to go home.. this is not for me..
anonymous Girl : Don't you want to Dance with me ?
Me : Huh ? *looks at the girl
anonymous Gilr : Dance with me or Get punch in the Face?
Me : Jess? Is that you? I mean.. wow.. you are soo beautiful
Jess : Yes it's me.. i'm going to slap you for not noticing me.. Btw.. you really think i'm Beautiful in this dress ? *Blush
Me : ahm.. Yes.. "How come.. a girl always play dota and acts like a boy.. dress like a boy.. would be like this.. "
Jess : hey don't stare at me.. i feel ashamed >.<
Me : You look great
Jess : ok let's go inside and have an entrance
Inside Gym..
Me : Wanna Dance With me?
Jess : ahmm.. Yes .. i want too..
Me : I'm sorry i'm not a good Dancer..
Jess : Me either..
*
The two of us dance like nobody is around... Time Stop on us.. Like we don't care what will happen tomorrow .. all i can say is.. she became more beautiful in her dress.. I also seen her face closely.. no make up but.. i can't tell... for me.. she's beautiful tonight.. Different from.. Jess i know .... she dance graceful and acts like a girl.."
Suddenly the Music Stop..
Jess:Hey Josh.. the Music Stop..
Me: ow.. it's too fast...
Jess : Wanna go outside and get some fresh air?
Me: ahmm ok.. there are too many people here.. so going outside is ok..
Outside the Gym..
Jess: ahmm Do you think i'm ok today?
Me: of course you look great... y..yo..you are beautiful ...
Jess: that's it?
Me: what that's it?
Jess: you are totally numb,,, I mean am i ok ?
Me : yeah your ok..
Jess : i mean.. am i ok to be your partner..?
Me : Partner?
Jess: yup Partner .. i mean. Your Girl.. I want to be your girl.. .. you are always telling me that i'm a boy.. so i'm dressed like this to prove to you that.. i can be more beautiful than Marz..
Me: *Shocks
Jezz: I'm willing to change myself.. i can do what ever it is.. i can be your best girl ever.. i will not punch you ,i will not tease you anymore.. so please..
Me:Jess ... this is unexpected .. i can't answer right now..
Jezz : Is it Marz?
Me: No.. not her.. it because maybe let's think about it ok? were friends right?
Jezz : Stupid... you are stupid! * Runaway Crying
Me : Jess wait.. Don't be like that.. hey come back..
To be Continue...
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Sat Aug 04, 2012 12:42 pm
Foooooooooooookk!! I want more!! XD
The storyline is cute!! Please!! Add more chapters in the future!!! OwO
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
The storyline is cute!! Please!! Add more chapters in the future!!! OwO
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
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Sat Aug 04, 2012 1:07 pm
Shocks... Tingnan niyo naiyak tuloy ako.. Napifeel ko si girl.
T.T
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Sat Aug 04, 2012 1:16 pm
waa... may karugtong na yan..
saka ko na i release :3
saka ko na i release :3
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Sat Aug 04, 2012 1:39 pm
Pustahan tayo , nangyayare sa real life to.
at hula ko buhay ni Shatzu to.
at hula ko buhay ni Shatzu to.
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Sat Aug 04, 2012 1:49 pm
ahaha secret
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Sat Aug 04, 2012 2:33 pm
` PART TWO PLS @_@
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Sat Aug 04, 2012 3:03 pm
ahaha... tomorrow.. ahaha
:3
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Sun Aug 05, 2012 10:45 pm
Zero wrote:Pustahan tayo , nangyayare sa real life to.
at hula ko buhay ni Shatzu to.
hehe
>>>
naks,, mala one shot manga,, hehe
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Tue Aug 07, 2012 5:11 pm
ahaha d pa nga nare release ung part 2....
inaayos ko pa mabuti..
inaayos ko pa mabuti..
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Tue Aug 07, 2012 5:17 pm
part two part two!!! tehehehe
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Tue Aug 07, 2012 5:21 pm
ahaha patience.. ahahha
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Mon Aug 13, 2012 8:11 pm
True Life ata talaga to ni Pare'ng Shatzu eh.
Oy by the way, Andyan ka pala Harlyn :D @ xaumiie
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Oy by the way, Andyan ka pala Harlyn :D @ xaumiie
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Tue Aug 14, 2012 10:31 am
I admire your work, keep it up. :))
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Sat Aug 18, 2012 6:19 pm
Dada!! Where's the second part!!?
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Sun Sep 02, 2012 8:20 pm
<---- Bitin
I want Part Two :/Kon5a:
I want Part Two :/Kon5a:
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Sun Sep 02, 2012 8:33 pm
nice--
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Tue Jan 15, 2013 3:56 pm
Awwwh :<
Worth it ang aksidenteng pagpindot ko dito!
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Worth it ang aksidenteng pagpindot ko dito!
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Tue Jan 15, 2013 4:03 pm
nice one..!!
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Sat Jan 19, 2013 11:55 pm
wew..... when part two?
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