SAO loli

the loli image is cute ... though i;m not a fun of lolita but it's good that you could do small version of them hahah


nice job in the outline .. i thnik more shading would really help the picture look more a live hehe .... hope you'll consider the advice and the critic and don;t take it personal haha thank you

chalamat sa advice and comment  

gusto ko din magdrawing >.<.. katamad lang ii.. hehe

hahahhaa... nakakapag drawing lang ako pag-nakakakita ako ng extrang bond paper sa bahay...  

eureka_urusai wrote:

Hello @ eureka_urusai. The drawing concept is nice. The eyes are well drawn, they are alive. The problems are, shading, lack of outlines, no break point between lines, shallow borders and hazy appearance. The whole drawing look nice, but the hazy appearance prevent it from distinguishing other parts and important components.

Suggestions:
1. Try to shade more, as to Androssi said, shading will do a lot better.
2. Maintain a border outline between components.
3. Darken the shades, the folds and the outlines.
4. Outline the parts, they appear hazy and hard to distinguish if it is not.

ang cute ng style mo

ganda buti pa kayo marunong ako walang pagasa xD hahaha

lol hahhhahhaa... senya na mga berks ngAyon lang ako nakapag post ng reply....... hahhaha

HnCo04 wrote:ganda buti pa kayo marunong ako walang pagasa xD hahaha

think positive wag kang aayaw!!habang may buhay may pag-asa.... charoot!