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Mon Aug 20, 2012 9:03 pm
Warning: The story below contains mature content and strong words.
Rated: R15
Disclaimer: All the characters, events in the story are purely fictional.
Author’s Note: I didn’t get a beta-reader to check the grammar nor spelling still I posted it to my own discretion. It is a one-shot story I made in a whim for about 20 minutes. This is “The Demon Version 1.” subject to revision in the near future (maybe in the website that I will be creating)… ahahahah Ahahaha I was bored when I did this so I thought why don’t I try to make something like this. And then I got the urge to do this and the result is “The demon” ahahaha….. and next time I will be doing or creating an INSANELY HAPPY STORY ahahahahahahhahaha.



The Demon
By Dragon.God
It was Friday the 13th, 7:00 in the morning. I was just sitting there at the bottom corner of my bed, staring blankly ahead at the dusty mirror, Looking deeply in the reflection of my eyes. As I stare deeply and the time passes while remembering the vivid dream I had last night. I uttered “The world will change” when a familiar voice suddenly called me and brought me back to the reality. “Your breakfast is ready; I’ve served your favorite dishes.” Shirley Said.


My wife Shirley is a tall, slender, white girl with a long straight black hair. She has an angelic face, so innocent that any men would be dreaming of. I know I am lucky guy until the cogs of fate begin to turn. However, slow or fast the sudden turn of event is, I just can’t comprehend it. I just know there is something wrong with this situation.


As I am going down the stair I said to myself “I love her...I really love her so much that I am willing to sacrifice my own life just for her” and then I grinned. “You really are beautiful” I said it to her as soon as I saw her radiant face bathing in the sunlight. The sun rays passing through the windows which accentuated her features even more and she replied to me with a gentle laugh and then said “Thank you”.


At that time I suddenly moved closer to her and I KILLED “HER”. A lot of thoughts came into my mind. I am trying to convince myself that I did this for our sake. “Even though I said I am willing to give my life to her, I just can’t seem to see that she will be living alone without me so I decided to kill her in order not to broke my promise to her, you will never feel pain with me by your side and if you ever do that would be the first and the last pain you will ever remember”.


A tears falls down from my eyes, I said it to myself too that it would be the last tear that would fall from my eyes. I looked at the clock. “Its 8:59 in the morning ...” I sighed and smiled. The reason that I did this is the reason of each of us going to the extent of killing someone or is it just MY FUCK-UP PERSONALITY, those were my last thoughts and at that same time I died.




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Mon Aug 20, 2012 9:10 pm
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Going to delete this as this is a work of a lolicon.
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Mon Aug 20, 2012 9:27 pm
@cboy123.. LoL xD


HAHAHAHAHA!! Bazinga! xD
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Mon Aug 20, 2012 9:54 pm
wahahahaha welcome back my lizard hahahha :) sig ko !!!!!!!!!!! hahahahaha
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Tue Aug 21, 2012 2:39 am
I find the twist very surprising, the MC loved her and yet he killed her. I have always been a fan of psychotic killing and deaths (to some extent), it chills me to the bone. xDD
I really liked this story, in a dark sense... :D
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Tue Aug 21, 2012 10:45 am
just another makoto itou story.
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Wed Aug 22, 2012 12:25 pm
ahahaha thank you for all the comments...ahahhaha
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Tue Sep 04, 2012 9:59 pm
Like. :)
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Sun Feb 24, 2013 5:23 pm
Obssesed Hubby :OO

Good to hear that you died at the end :OO
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Tue Feb 26, 2013 10:23 pm

Creepy Guy.. X)
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Sat Mar 09, 2013 3:32 am
It's really spooky! Although it's awesome! .sugoi
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