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A simple short story..
Tue Oct 22, 2013 12:29 pm
First, I want to say to you all that I love making stories.. I have many stories that I submitted to different forums. Since this will my first story to post here, I'll make it short. I recommend to you to play this piece (since I can't find the piano version, this will be enough and also... I can't find the Romeo x Juliet piano version!! OMG!).. This instrumental motivated me to create this short story.
Note: If you think you had read a story that is very close to mine, well don't worry. I didn't have any intention to violate copyright regulations so rest assured =)
Comments/criticisms are all welcome..
This is a story of a 10 year old girl who met a certain boy of her age in a park. She is a very rich girl. Her a father is a millionaire. And.. she never knew that her life will change.
Thanks for reading..
Note: If you think you had read a story that is very close to mine, well don't worry. I didn't have any intention to violate copyright regulations so rest assured =)
Comments/criticisms are all welcome..
This is a story of a 10 year old girl who met a certain boy of her age in a park. She is a very rich girl. Her a father is a millionaire. And.. she never knew that her life will change.
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There is a girl who lives in a huge house near a park. She sometimes go there to play.. alone. She doesn't have any friends like a normal child would have. One day, she, with her nanny, were in the slide. Her face was devoid of any expressions. Suddenly, a young boy walked towards the slide.
"Can I join you?" the boy asked.
She looked at her nanny. She nodded and the little girl said "Yes."
The two played along together. Time passed by and it was time for the girl to return to her house.
"Can we play again?" she asked the boy.
"Of course!" the boy smiled and for the first time the girl showed a very lovely smile.
Days had passed and they became best friends. The girl was so happy she always talked to her father about the boy and her father smiled at her daughter who was so happy. One sunny Sunday, the girl waited in the park. Her smile was as radiant as the sun. Her nanny sat by the bench and was having a break. She waited for a while but the boy never showed up. She thought that he might be busy so she returned to her house.
Weeks passed. There's still no sign of the boy. She became sad and thought that he might never show up so she stopped going to the park.
8 years later. The little girl became a very beautiful young woman. Many had tried to win her heart but she turned them down gently and properly. One day on an event hosted by her father, she attracted almost all of the guys in the party. Her father introduced her to his colleagues. Of course, she already knew the thing about her fiance from her father for he told her about it before the party even started. She didn't know anything about the guy. Only his name was Steve.
Later that night, she felt tired and went out to the balcony. The moon was beaming so greatly. The sky was full of stars. She sat on a chair that was placed there.
"The sky is so beautiful." she took a breath. How she wished she could see again her only friend. Yes. She still thought about him. "What are you doing now?" Tears slowly ran down her cheeks. "W-why am I crying?" She wiped her face with her handkerchief. "Is there a chance that we can meet again? I still don't know his name. W-why is it that I feel so lonely? It has been years but why am I still like this? Towards him?" Her tears continued running down her cheeks.
"A-are you okay?"
Suddenly, a voice was heard behind her.
"Ah-..ehm?" she was surprised. She looked behind her and saw a guy standing there. "Y-yes. Sorry for troubling you."
"Hmmm. Why are you crying?" he asked again.
"W-why? I don't know either."
"Uh.. maybe you remembered something of the past? Or something else.. Hmm.." the guy held his chin and was wondering. "Uhm.. I mean.. Sorry to bother you. I'm going now."
The guy turned around and was about to leave her when..
"Wait!"
..the girl called out to him.
"Hmm?" he again turned around to look at her.
"Might if I tell you a short story?"
"Uh. Sure."
The girl told him about her past. How she had met a kid of her age and was so happy that she made her first friend. The boy listened to her. An expression of sadness was on his face.
"And then.. and then.. he left.. He never told me he was leaving nor he told me his name. No it was my fault for not asking it." she cried harder this time. She was really.. deeply in love with him. Even now.
The guy stood up from his chair. She cannot see his face because it was so dark and the moon is directly behind him. She wondered what had happened to him.
"I.... I am sorry..."
"N-no. You have no fault here-"
"I am so sorry.."
The boy fell down to his knees. His face was... there were tears in his face.
"W-wha.."
"I..I didn't intend to leave you that time. My parents decided to move that day and they didn't even told me about it. I wanted to see you one last time but my parents didn't approve my plea. S-so..so I was not able to meet you."
The girl was so shocked to hear all of those words from the guy in front of her. Her tears seemed to be unstoppable as she continued to wipe it.
"I cannot forget about you. I think about you. I think of the things you might be doing."
"...."
"Before I know it, I was in love with you. Even now." The guy's face was now visible. The girl looked at his face and was shocked. That kid in the park.. really looked like him.
A smile rose from her lips. She stood up, walked slowly towards him, put her hands to his shoulders and made him stand up. The boy was surprised. Surprised to see her beautiful face so close to him. And her smile. The smile that he was searching for all these years.
"W-what is your name?"
"Steve.."
To her shock, he was her fiance that she never knew. She can't stop her happiness from overflowing.
"I'm Lucy.. and you know how much I've been missing you.."
"S-sorry. I'm sorry."
"No. Please. Look at me."
The guy look at her and was stunned. She gently wiped his tears.
"I want you to know that I am still deeply in love with you. From that time and even up to now." Without holding back she kissed him.
Thanks for reading..
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Mon Oct 28, 2013 1:15 pm
Woah that was an awesome story, If you have made it longer it should've been better! I look forward on Reading your other stories :D
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Mon Oct 28, 2013 1:40 pm
woah !!~ tHat's aWesome pO .. i lOve reAdiNg sTorIes pO .. pEro sUgGest pO .. pWde pO matAas gAndA eHH ,, lOve iT !!~
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Mon Dec 30, 2013 4:31 pm
For those who are reading this.. this is the instrumental I want you to play while reading it.. I promise you.. it's wonderful!! Here's the link enjoy it.. hehe
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Sat Jan 04, 2014 12:33 pm
Yes, Definitely a "Simple Story" but worth reading. Yes it was a "Short Story" but worth my time. 
I thought that this thread will just waste a couple of minutes in my LIFE.
I thought that this thread will just waste a couple of minutes in my LIFE.
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Tue Jan 14, 2014 7:49 am
thanks sa share 
what a great story :D
what a great story :D
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Wed Jan 22, 2014 6:29 am
Good story indeed :) to not forget someone and still love him for a long time.
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Thu Mar 06, 2014 2:59 pm
^_^ beautiful story!
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Mon Mar 31, 2014 3:16 am
This is certainly cool! 
But.. isn't it a bit too fast? I mean, the ending. They already kissed even though they've only met again after so many year. It's just a question though. Don't take it seriously.
But.. isn't it a bit too fast? I mean, the ending. They already kissed even though they've only met again after so many year. It's just a question though. Don't take it seriously.
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Mon Mar 31, 2014 9:58 am
JYTG wrote: This is certainly cool!
But.. isn't it a bit too fast? I mean, the ending. They already kissed even though they've only met again after so many year. It's just a question though. Don't take it seriously.
Ot's okay! No worries! Sometimes we need to clarify things right? Haha!
Well for that part.. Let's say, I don't want to make it longer. The original lines there were:
'She hugged him tightly after saying those words.'
But.. my friends ask me why only hug? Why not kiss? Haha! I hope that answer your question. Thanks!
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Mon Mar 31, 2014 11:49 am
Nice story :bd Nilalanggam ako dito haha :)))
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Mon Mar 31, 2014 2:30 pm
Strayed wrote:JYTG wrote: This is certainly cool!
But.. isn't it a bit too fast? I mean, the ending. They already kissed even though they've only met again after so many year. It's just a question though. Don't take it seriously.
Ot's okay! No worries! Sometimes we need to clarify things right? Haha!
Well for that part.. Let's say, I don't want to make it longer. The original lines there were:
'She hugged him tightly after saying those words.'
But.. my friends ask me why only hug? Why not kiss? Haha! I hope that answer your question. Thanks!
Yep! It answered my question.
Your friends were right. It made the story cheesier. 
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Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:38 pm
Haha! You are definitely right about that 
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