- ElijahTheBeatStraw Hat Pirate
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Scarf
Thu Sep 05, 2013 9:47 pm
There was a kid named Kevin he is a loner no one approach him except for his bestfriend Karen she always say to kevin do not be sad im still here kevin told her but but... i heard that you will leave me you will study in abroad please dont leave me im afraid karen i need you karen told her that do not be afraid here take these scarf everytime you will miss me hug the scarf as karen leave him and 10 years past as karen have a vacation in phillipines and when kevin heard about that news he was so excited when karen get out of the taxi kevin hug her so tight and suddenly karen push her and kevin was so shocked and ask karen dont you remember me karen it's me kevin kevin dont you remember (crying) and karen look at him and karen told her that i dont know you who are you? karen's mother tell karen to go in the house and the mother of karen told kevin that you know kevin when we are at the states karen was with her friends they are riding in the van when suddenly the driver didnt know there was a old granny crossing down the street as the driver turn in the left and outbalance the car and they hit the tree karen was brought to the hospital and after the operation in her head she didnt remember anything except for her family when kevin heard about her story kevin locked himself in his room for 3 days crying over and over while crying kevin saw a toy that karen gift to him in christmass and he realize that if he show the toy to karen so karen can remember him he was running towards the house of karen and he knocked the door karen open it and Kevin was smiling he and kneeling and showing to karen the toy and karen looking at him and tell kevin what is your problem can you stay out of my life i dont kow you and what is that smelly ugly toy will you please throw that and kevin didnt appreciate and everyday he keeps showing all of the things that karen gave to him but nothing happened when the family of karen invited the family of kevin for a dinner keven stalk karen outside because karen will answer the phone a three mysterious guy approach karen while touching karen and getting the things at the bag of karen kevin run towards her and fight the 2 snatchers and the snatchers stab kevin and they run kevin was laying in the legs of karen and crying and karen told kevin kevin kevin please dont give up dont give up (crying) and kevin show her the scarf and the memories of karen with kevin she remember it all her bestfriend kevin she was crying and regretting why did she say all those things to kevin she was apologizing to kevin and kevin touch her face dont c..ryy it's not your fault hahah i think it is my time now to die here keep this scarf for me if your cry just hug that karen okay? and after few minutes kevin died..karen was crying at the end the scarf was kept under generations
thank you for reading the story ^^ hope you like it it was not good ? ehehehhe sorry it it my first time to make a story ^^
thank you for reading the story ^^ hope you like it it was not good ? ehehehhe sorry it it my first time to make a story ^^
- ChihiroAoiFairy Tail Mage
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Re: Scarf
Thu Sep 05, 2013 10:30 pm
It is good for your first time writing a story :) ..but I think you need to make things more interesting or unpredictable ...somehow the story is pretty simple/normal...
*I'm looking forward to your next story ^^*
*I'm looking forward to your next story ^^*
- ElijahTheBeatStraw Hat Pirate
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Re: Scarf
Fri Sep 06, 2013 7:28 am
oh ok heheheehhe thank you :))))
- SacredEdgeTNMAA VIP Member
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Re: Scarf
Fri Sep 06, 2013 7:39 am
Simple yet a very nice story my friend..
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- ElijahTheBeatStraw Hat Pirate
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Re: Scarf
Fri Sep 06, 2013 7:46 am
thank you ^^
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